Almightoronia

First , I am putting my all my efforts into writing the novel , editing it , then translating it and editing it again . Therefore , I hope for your encouragement and interaction no matter how simple it may seem to you , it means a lot to me.The novel will be amazing and uniqueThe story is better then a lot of famous novel's stories and i am doing my best to make it logical and develop in correct wayI think i create a new type of novels when the MC reincarnate but 5 years before the appearance of my RPG gameMy novel will contain 3 parts every new one will be much bigger than the old oneThe firs part is the story in the real EarthThe second is in the game when we will have a world between fantazy and cultivation The third is when the humans travel to the new world or the game's worldWe will have more parts but it will came latterI will make a work similar to my favourite works with more than 3000 chapitres and i need your support and helpIf you are interested in being a caracter in my novel ore have any ideas feel free to contact me ire write it in the comments

Lots of inconsistency. ML can’t find his mate in a closed off room thinking she was just hiding. He’s an Alpha for pete’s sake. Even their son can find her Mom leaving from the hospital so he had to run to where her scent leads him. There was also the scene where FL asked her son in a whisper to not call her Mom while ML is just at the back of her. An Alpha should have a heightened hearing. What is this?

parece que promete, interesante de momento

It’s readable I guess, better then those novels where grammar is nonexistent.

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But to Ryuu, those are not the most difficult obstacles what is an obstacle is that his 3D maneuvering gear cannot support his weight so Ryuu has to always infuse his 3D gear with his hair in such a manner that ist visible yet strong enough to sustain the string

"but how come she still small? "

But in the dawn of 2020, right as the crowds cheered for a new year in Times Square, the world changed. A comet lit up the sky, and as its rainbow-colored tail streaked across the sky, it awakened the age of the superhero.